domingo, 23 de enero de 2011

Review

Long time ago, in ancient civilizations, smoking started. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but(,) as time start(started) to pas(passing) ;(,) smoking became more (of a) pleasure than (a) ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one (of the most important) health issue(s). Smoking is one of the bigger(biggest) killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death(,) and cause a lot of sickness(es)(,) and health issues. When you smoke(,) you inhale the gas(es/smoke) in to(into) your lungs,(;) this is one of the more effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream but its(´) also a way to introduce more substances that main(may) result harmful; harming (for) your vascular system and making(make) you prone to cardio and vascular diseases (such)as: vascular stenosis, heart attacks (,)and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (-)this without mention lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social life’s(lives) but it’s also ones of the most dangerous social tools at long term use because of all of his(its) health issues.

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