Writing 2

Write a paragraph about the reasons teenagers do about anything to be cool.

Oral Presentation 3

Weeks ago I was watching TV and in the Andres Openheimer’s show, he presented a piece that seemed really interesting. This news was about the new ways young people were doping, or as the informal language says, “getting high”. Of all the different ways mentioned through the show the way that caught my eye the most is called “I-doping” and it consists only in using audio tracks with different kinds of sounds and rhythms, but how does it work? This is what got me curious. The audio tracks are being sold over the Internet and they consist in a melody, composed in two tones that are called binaural. These digital songs played in high volume alter the brain waves and supposedly offer psychoactive effects on the listener, the same ones that some drugs give. Scientists have been considering if the I-doping is harmful and how it may work. Nowadays scientific studies results were published in ABC and have found that I-doping is inoffensive and they say that the effects are even helpful for the persons that suffer from anxiety, and even some persons actually feel a state of ecstasy with this practice. In these studies scientists argue that all is just suggestions from the user and what he wants to feel. Analyzing the consequences of these digital drugs may be a little difficult because they aren’t drugs and based on the studies we may say they don’t have negative or harmful effects but these drugs may introduce young persons to other drugs. The fact that you have already “tried” drugs, even if they are digital and fake could make young persons prone to trying real ones thinking they are just the same. This is why we have to worry and do something about all these trends that may result harmful for the society.

Review

Weeks ago I was watching TV and in the Andres Openheimer’s show, they(he) presented a new notice a piece that seem(seemed) really interesting. This new(news) notice was about the new ways young people were doping(,) or as the informal language says, “getting high”. Of all the different ways mentioned through the show the way that attracted my attention (caught my eye) the most is called “I-doping” and it consists only in using audio tracks with different kinds of sounds and rhythms, but how does it works(work)? (This) Is(is) what have (got) me curious. The audio tracks are being sold over the Internet and they consist in a melody, composed in two tones that are called binaural. These digital songs played in high volume alter the brain waves and supposedly offer psychoactive effects on the listener, the same ones that some drugs give. Scientists have been considering if the I-doping is harmful and how it may work. Nowadays scientific studies results were published in ABC and have found that I-doping is inoffensive and they say that the effects are even helpful for the persons that suffer from anxiety(,) (and) even though some persons actually feel a state of ecstasy with this practice. In this (these) studies scientist(scientists) argue that all is just suggestions from the user of (and) what he wants to feel. What is certain is that these songs may harm you and after all the better way of living is out of all these vices that our surroundings offer. Analyzing the consequences of these digital drugs may be a little difficult because they aren’t drugs and based on the studies we may say they don’t have negative or harmful effects but these drugs may introduce young persons to other drugs. The fact that you have already “tried” drugs, even if they are digital and fake- and will (couls) make young persons prone to try(trying) real ones thinking (they are) just the same. This is why we have to worry and do something about all this(these) trends that may result harmful for the society.

Oral Presentation 2

Weeks ago I was watching TV and in the Andres Openheimer’s show, they presented a new notice that seem really interesting. This new notice was about the new ways young people were doping or as the informal language says, “getting high”. Of all the different ways mentioned through the show the way that attracted my attention the most is called “I-doping” and it consists only in using audio tracks with different kinds of sounds and rhythms, but how does it works? Is what have me curious. The audio tracks are being sold over the Internet and they consist in a melody, composed in two tones that are called binaural. These digital songs played in high volume alter the brain waves and supposedly offer psychoactive effects on the listener, the same ones that some drugs give. Scientists have been considering if the I-doping is harmful and how it may work. Nowadays scientific studies results were published in ABC and have found that I-doping is inoffensive and they say that the effects are even helpful for the persons that suffer from anxiety, even though some persons actually feel a state of ecstasy with this practice. In this studies scientist argue that all is just suggestions from the user of what he wants to feel. What is certain is that these songs may harm you and after all the better way of living is out of all these vices that our surroundings offer. Analyzing the consequences of these digital drugs may be a little difficult because they aren’t drugs and based on the studies we may say they don’t have negative or harmful effects but these drugs may introduce young persons to other drugs. The fact that you have already “tried” drugs, even if they are digital and fake- and will make young persons prone to try real ones thinking just the same. This is why we have to worry and do something about all this trends that may result harmful for the society.

Review

Weeks ago I was looking the (watching)TV and in the Andres Openheimer’s show(,) they present(ed) a new (What?) that seem really interesting. This new (what?) was about the new ways young people were doping or as the informal language says, “getting high”.(Explain why teens are so susceptible of manipulation.) (Here mention the traditional ones and why they are so popular with young people.) Of all the (different ways mentioned through out the) show the way that attract(ed) my attention (the most) is called “I-doping” and (it) consist(s) only in using audio tracks with different kinds of sounds and rhythms, but how (does) it work(s)? if it does is what still have me curious(rephrase). These audio tracks are being sold over the Internet and (they) consist in a melody, composed in two tones that are called binaural. These digital songs played in high volume alter the brain waves and supposedly offer psychoactive effects on the listener, the same ones that some drugs give. (Mention some statistics of this "vice")Scientists have been considering if the idoping is harmful and how it may work. Nowadays they have found that I-doping is inoffensive and they say that the effects are even helpful for the persons that suffer from anxiety, even though some persons actually feel a state of ecstasy with this practice. Scientist argue that all is just suggestions from the user of what he wants to feel.(Explain the term palliative and how this applies to what you just mentioned.) What is certain is that this songs may harm you and after all the better way of living is out of all this(these) vices that (our surroundings) offer us the surroundings.

I-Doping

Weeks ago I was looking the TV and in the Andres Openheimer’s show they present a new that seem really interesting. This new was about the new ways young people were doping or as the informal language says, “getting high”. Of all the show the way that attract my attention is called “I-doping” and consist only in using audio tracks with different kinds of sounds and rhythms, but how it works? if it does is what still have me curious. These audio tracks are being sold over the Internet and consist in a melody, composed in two tones that are called binaural. These digital songs played in high volume alter the brain waves and supposedly offer psychoactive effects on the listener, the same ones that some drugs give. Scientists have been considering if the idoping is harmful and how it may work. Nowadays they have found that I-doping is inoffensive and they say that the effects are even helpful for the persons that suffer from anxiety, even though some persons actually feel a state of ecstasy with this practice. Scientist argue that all is just suggestions from the user of what he wants to feel. What is certain is that this songs may harm you and after all the better way of living is out of all this vices that offer us the surroundings.