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The Effects Of Smoking 3

Smoking started long time ago, in ancient civilizations. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but, as time started passing, smoking became more of a pleasure than a ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one of the most important health issues. Smoking, like a hobby, is a way to feel related to other persons. You can make a pretty good chat with the justification of a cigarette. Below a cigarette light you can talk, analyze and describe almost any problem, intrigue, or worry. In social life some people, categorize smoking as a cool, funny, and some kind of attractive habit, but it is way more than a social tool. Smoking is one of the biggest killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death, and a cause of a lot of sicknesses, and health issues. When you smoke, you inhale the smoke into your lungs; this is not only one of the most effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream, but it’s also the most effective way to introduce great ammounts of substances that may result harmful; harming your vascular system and making you prone to cardio and vascular diseases such as: vascular stenosis, heart attacks, and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease. This without mentioning lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social lives but it’s also one of the most dangerous social tools at long-term use because of all of its health issues.

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(Smoking started) (l)Long time ago, in ancient civilizations. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but, as time started to passing, smoking became more of a pleasure than a ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one of the most important health issues. Smoking, like a hobby or a profession, is a way to feel related to (an)other person. You can make a pretty good chat with the justification of a cigarette. Below a cigarette light you can talk, analyze and describe almost any problem, intrigue, or worry. In social life (-some people,) smoking is categorized (smoking) as a cool, funny, and some kind of attractive habit (by some persons), but (it) is way more than a social tool. Smoking is one of the biggest killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death, and (a) cause (of) a lot of sicknesses, and health issues. When you smoke, you inhale the smoke into your lungs; this is (not only) one of the more (most) effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream(,) but it’s also (the mosto effective) a way to introduce (great ammounts of)more substances that may result harmful; harming for your vascular system and make(ing) you prone to cardio and vascular diseases such: vascular stenosis, heart attacks, and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease. This without mention(ing) lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social lives but it’s also ones of the most dangerous social tools at long-term use because of all of its health issues.

The Effects Of smoking 2

Long time ago, in ancient civilizations, smoking started. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but, as time started to passing, smoking became more of a pleasure than a ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one of the most important health issues. Smoking, like a hobby or a profession, is a way to feel related to other person. You can make a pretty good chat with the justification of a cigarette. Below a cigarette light you can talk, analyze and describe almost any problem, intrigue, or worry. In social life smoking is categorized as a cool, funny, and some kind of attractive habit (by some persons), but is way more than a social tool. Smoking is one of the biggest killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death, and cause a lot of sicknesses, and health issues. When you smoke, you inhale the smoke into your lungs; this is one of the more effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream but it’s also a way to introduce more substances that may result harmful; harming for your vascular system and make you prone to cardio and vascular diseases such: vascular stenosis, heart attacks, and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease. This without mention lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social lives but it’s also ones of the most dangerous social tools at long-term use because of all of its health issues.

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Long time ago, in ancient civilizations, smoking started. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but(,) as time start(started) to pas(passing) ;(,) smoking became more (of a) pleasure than (a) ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one (of the most important) health issue(s). Smoking is one of the bigger(biggest) killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death(,) and cause a lot of sickness(es)(,) and health issues. When you smoke(,) you inhale the gas(es/smoke) in to(into) your lungs,(;) this is one of the more effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream but its(´) also a way to introduce more substances that main(may) result harmful; harming (for) your vascular system and making(make) you prone to cardio and vascular diseases (such)as: vascular stenosis, heart attacks (,)and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (-)this without mention lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social life’s(lives) but it’s also ones of the most dangerous social tools at long term use because of all of his(its) health issues.

The Effects of Smoking

Long time ago, in ancient civilizations, smoking started. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but as time start to pass; smoking became more pleasure than ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one health issue. Smoking is one of the bigger killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death and cause a lot of sickness and health issues. When you smoke you inhale the gas in to your lungs, this is one of the more effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream but its also a way to introduce more substances that main result harmful; harming your vascular system and making you prone to cardio and vascular diseases as: vascular stenosis, heart attacks and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease this without mention lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social life’s but it’s also ones of the most dangerous social tools at long term use because of all of his health issues.

Writing 1

Write a paragraph about the effects of smoking.