
Smoking started long time ago, in ancient civilizations. In the beginning smoking was part of religious rituals, as a way to contact the spiritual world, but, as time started passing, smoking became more of a pleasure than a ritual. Nowadays smoking is one of the most effective social tools but also one of the most important health issues. Smoking, like a hobby, is a way to feel related to other persons. You can make a pretty good chat with the justification of a cigarette. Below a cigarette light you can talk, analyze and describe almost any problem, intrigue, or worry. In social life some people, categorize smoking as a cool, funny, and some kind of attractive habit, but it is way more than a social tool. Smoking is one of the biggest killers in the world today; it kills approximately 500,000 humans per year only in the United States. It is considered one of the most important causes of premature death, and a cause of a lot of sicknesses, and health issues. When you smoke, you inhale the smoke into your lungs; this is not only one of the most effective ways to deliver drugs into your bloodstream, but it’s also the most effective way to introduce great ammounts of substances that may result harmful; harming your vascular system and making you prone to cardio and vascular diseases such as: vascular stenosis, heart attacks, and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease. This without mentioning lung cancer. This means that smoking may be a principal part of people's social lives but it’s also one of the most dangerous social tools at long-term use because of all of its health issues.
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